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[Adslmib] Further Comments on draft-ietf-adslmib-vdsl2-05.txt

Editors,
 
    I have the following additional comments:
 
    Line #1081: OLD   --->  "indicated in octets 0-1"
                      NEW --->  "indicated by octets 0-1"
 
    Line #1097: OLD   --->  "indicated in octets 0-1"
                      NEW --->  "indicated by octets 0-1"
 
    Line #1557: "xtUs" should be "xTUs" 
 
    Line #1582: "Similarly" replace by "In a similar manner".
 
    Section 2.9, Paragraph 3 Lines #1779 and #1780 - remove the repetition of "FEC Seconds".
 
   
 
Best Regards,
Menachem
 
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