[apps-discuss] apps-team review of draft-ietf-mif-current-practices-11

Xiaodong Lee <lee@cnnic.cn> Wed, 27 April 2011 13:54 UTC

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From: Xiaodong Lee <lee@cnnic.cn>
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Subject: [apps-discuss] apps-team review of draft-ietf-mif-current-practices-11
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I have been selected as the Applications Area Review Team reviewer for 
this draft (for background on apps-review, please see 
http://www.apps.ietf.org/content/applications-area-review-team).

Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments 
you may receive. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd 
or AD before posting a new version of the draft.

Document: draft-ietf-mif-current-practices-11
Title: Current Practices for Multiple Interface Hosts
Reviewer: Xiaodong Lee

Review Date: April 26, 2011

Review Summary:
This draft is almost ready for publication as an Informational RFC but 
has a few issues that suggested to be fixed before publication.

Major Issues:
This draft gives the introduction about the multiple-interface solutions 
implemented in some widely used operating systems. It seems that this 
draft just simply introduces or lists every example. The author might 
consider the following suggestions:
     - Do some simple analysis of pros and cons of every implementation 
or solution;
     - Compare different solutions and make some possible suggestions. 
Since this draft aims for an informational RFC, doing some analysis and 
comparison will be helpful for the readers.

Minor issues:
- Both the "multiple-interface" and the "multi-interface" are used in 
this document with the same meaning.
- Term "PEERDNS" might have reference.


Nits:
- In Section 3.2.2.3, second paragraph, third sentence:
                 "become" should be "becomes" here.

Regards,

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Xiaodong Lee,
VP&CTO, CNNIC
Professor, Chinese Academy of Sciences

[apps-discuss] apps-team review of draft-ietf-mif… Xiaodong Lee
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