[apps-discuss] APPSDIR review of draft-harkins-ipsecme-spsk-auth-06
Yoshiro YONEYA <yoshiro.yoneya@jprs.co.jp> Thu, 02 February 2012 09:23 UTC
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From: Yoshiro YONEYA <yoshiro.yoneya@jprs.co.jp>
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I have been selected as the Applications Area Directorate reviewer for this draft (for background on appsdir, please see http://trac.tools.ietf.org/area/app/trac/wiki/ApplicationsAreaDirectorate). Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. Document: draft-harkins-ipsecme-spsk-auth-06 Title: Secure PSK Authentication for IKE Reviewer: Yoshiro Yoneya Review Date: 2012-02-02 IETF Last Call Date: 2012-02-14 IESG Telechat Date: 2012-03-15 Summary: This draft is almost ready for publication as an Experimental RFC but has a few nits that should be fixed before publication. Major Issues: Minor Issues: Nits: - Section 4.2 Two elementx, X and Y, --> Two element, X and Y, - Section 7 [RFC5996]) --> [RFC5996] - Section 8.2.2 ske-value = prf+(swd-seed, "IKE SKE Hunting And Pecking") --> ske-value = prf+(ske-seed, "IKE SKE Hunting And Pecking") - Section 8.5.1 [RFC6467]) --> [RFC6467] Regards, -- Yoshiro YONEYA <yoshiro.yoneya@jprs.co.jp>
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