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Eran Hammer <eran@hueniverse.com> Wed, 29 February 2012 19:13 UTC

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I have been selected as the Applications Area Directorate reviewer for this draft (for background on appsdir, please see http://trac.tools.ietf.org/area/app/trac/wiki/ApplicationsAreaDirectorate).

Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft.

Document: draft-reschke-http-status-308-05

Title: The Hypertext Transfer Protocol (HTTP) Status Code 308 (Permanent Redirect)

Reviewer: Eran Hammer

Review Date: 2012-02-29

IETF Last Call Date: 2012-03-16

Summary: This draft is ready for publication as Experimental

Major Issues:

None.

Minor Issues:

None.

Nits:

Section 3: I was expecting the section to read as if it was part of draft-ietf-httpbis-p2-semantics (e.g. the "missing" section 7.3.9). While all the technical information can be found in the document, it might be easier for readers to have section 3 written the same way 7.3.9 is written in draft-ietf-httpbis-p2-semantics.

Section 4: Add informative reference to current HTML specification.

EH

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