[apps-discuss] APPSDIR review of draft-ietf-dnsext-dnssec-registry-fixes-08

"Jiankang YAO" <yaojk@cnnic.cn> Tue, 13 March 2012 08:22 UTC

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I have been selected as the Applications Area Directorate reviewer 
for this draft (for background on appsdir, please 
see 
http://trac.tools.ietf.org/area/app/trac/wiki/ApplicationsAreaDirectorate 
).  
Please resolve these comments along with any other comments 
you may receive. Please wait for direction from your document 
shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft.

Document: draft-ietf-dnsext-dnssec-registry-fixes-08 
Title: 
Applicability Statement: DNS Security (DNSSEC) DNSKEY Algorithm IANA Registry
Reviewer: Jiankang Yao
Review Date: March 13, 2012

Summary:

This draft is useful. If it is published, the following 
issues should be considered or addressed before publication.

Minor issue:

1) The introduction said "This document updates
   the following: [RFC2536], [RFC2539], [RFC3110], [RFC4034], [RFC4398],
   [RFC5155], [RFC5702], and [RFC5933].
"

It should address what is updated  in these RFCs [RFC2536], [RFC2539], [RFC3110], [RFC4034], [RFC4398], [RFC5155], [RFC5702], and [RFC5933].


Nits:

This sentence below in the IANA considerations section should be noted with "removed when rfc is published".

"In the column "Compliance to RFC TBD", "RFC TBD" should bechanged to the official RFC when published.
"

Jiankang Yao