[apps-discuss] Fwd: APPSDIR review of draft-ietf-appsawg-greylisting-06

Joseph Yee <jyee@afilias.info> Wed, 18 April 2012 02:52 UTC

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Subject: [apps-discuss] Fwd: APPSDIR review of draft-ietf-appsawg-greylisting-06
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Bad typo in typing apps-discuss, forwarded the original review.

Joseph

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> From: Joseph Yee <jyee@afilias.info>
> Date: April 17, 2012 10:34:22 PM EDT
> To: app-discuss@ietf.org, draft-ietf-appsawg-greylisting.all@tools.ietf.org
> Subject: APPSDIR review of draft-ietf-appsawg-greylisting-06
> 
> I have been selected as the Applications Area Directorate reviewer for this draft (for background on appsdir, please see  http://trac.tools.ietf.org/area/app/trac/wiki/ApplicationsAreaDirectorate).
> 
> Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft.
> 
> Document: draft-ietf-appsawg-greylisting-06
> Title: Email Greylisting: An Applicability Statement for SMTP
> Reviewer: Joseph Yee
> Review Date: April 17, 2012
> 
> 
> Summary:  This draft is ready for publication as Proposed Standard AS
> 
> 
> Nits:
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> Section 5 Recommendation Point 4
> s/Administrative Domain (ADMD)/Administrative Management Domain (ADMD)/
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> Section 5 Recommendation Point 7
> s/authetnicated/authenticated/
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