[apps-discuss] AppsDir review of draft-ietf-eai-popimap-downgrade-05
Aaron Stone <aaron@serendipity.cx> Mon, 14 May 2012 14:22 UTC
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I have been selected as the Applications Area Directorate reviewer for this draft (for background on appsdir, please see http://trac.tools.ietf.org/area/app/trac/wiki/ApplicationsAreaDirectorate ). I apologize for the terrible tardiness of this review. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. Document: draft-ietf-eai-popimap-downgrade-05 Title: Post-delivery Message Downgrading for Internationalized Email Messages Reviewer: Aaron Stone Review Date: 5/13/2012 IETF Last Call Date: none found IESG Telechat Date: none scheduled Summary: This document has several commented-out discussion section that need to be resolved, however the normative text so far looks very good. Major Issues: none Minor Issues: - Section 5.1.8: Should the text be stronger about Received header removal? OLD Applying this procedure to "Received:" header field is prohibited. NEW Implementations MUST NOT alter or remove "Received:" headers, as this is prohibited by RFC 5321, Section 4.4. (Minor because it introduces a reference to SMTP RFC 5321 if the suggested text is used) - Section 5.2.5: "Other parts should not contain non-ASCII strings." What's the failure scenario if an oddly formed message does have a non-ASCII string here? Nits: - Abstract: Is the problem only that you cannot remove the message, or that you can't retrieve the message at all? - Throughout: lowercase "Email"; look for "internationalized Email" several times in the document, change to "internationalized email". - Section 1.1: change "allow" to "allows", remove the word "those". - Section 1.3, second paragraph: change "as a" to "in" - Section 1.3, third paragraph: remove the comma after [RFC6530] - Section 1.3, fourth paragraph: replace the comma; use a semi-colon. - Section 3, first paragraph: capitalize "pop/imap". - Section 3, third paragraph: capitalize "cc" - Section 5.1.8: OLD Encapsulate the header field in a "Downgraded-" header field as described in Section 4 as a last resort. NEW Encapsulate the header field in a "Downgraded-" header field as described in Section 4 only as a last resort, as the original is removed. - Section 9: Nit: change the word "all" to "any" OLD However [RFC6530] obsoleted [RFC5504] and this document does not use all "Downgraded-" header fields registered by [RFC5504]. NEW However [RFC6530] obsoleted [RFC5504] and this document does not use any "Downgraded-" header fields registered by [RFC5504]. Thanks, Aaron
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