[apps-discuss] APPS area review of: draft-ietf-abfab-gss-eap-06
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Date: Tue, 22 May 2012 16:31:08 -0700
From: William Mills <wmills@yahoo-inc.com>
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Subject: [apps-discuss] APPS area review of: draft-ietf-abfab-gss-eap-06
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Major: Section 5.8: still lists "Open issue: handling of lifetime parameters." Minor: Section 3.4: "RFC editor, remove the remainder of this subjection prior to publication.", do you mean "subsection" here? Section 5: The format of "length" should be more clearly defined her. A more detailed definition appears to live as the last three sentences in 5.6.3, which seems odd. Nits: Section 5.5.1 & 5.5.2: Is the phrase "It is always critical." something with specific meaning? Otherwise simply stating that these tokens are REQUIRED, is probably sufficient. Section 6: 3rd paragraph, "procedur" needs an "e" on the end. Section 7.1: "[this spec" wants a closing square bracket. Section 7.3: The choice of registered values seems odd; non-sequential, and slightly inconsistent (request vs. response not in consistent numerical order). Doesn't matter since it's constants.
- [apps-discuss] APPS area review of: draft-ietf-ab… William Mills
- Re: [apps-discuss] APPS area review of: draft-iet… Sam Hartman