[apps-discuss] APPSDIR review of draft-ietf-6lowpan-btle-07
"Jiankang Yao" <yaojk@cnnic.cn> Sat, 02 June 2012 01:47 UTC
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Subject: [apps-discuss] APPSDIR review of draft-ietf-6lowpan-btle-07
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I have been selected as the Applications Area Directorate reviewer for this draft (for background on appsdir, please see <http://trac.tools.ietf.org/area/app/trac/wiki/ApplicationsAreaDirectorate> http://trac.tools.ietf.org/area/app/trac/wiki/ApplicationsAreaDirectorate ). Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. Document: draft-ietf-6lowpan-btle-07 Title: Transmission of IPv6 Packets over Bluetooth Low Energy Reviewer: Jiankang Yao Review Date: 1 June 2012 Summary: This draft is well-written and ready for publication as an Standards Track document. Major Issues: none Minor Issues: none Nits: In section 2: In the rest of the draft---> In the rest of this document In section 3.2 : This draft assumes ---à This document assumes Comments: This draft will be a RFC. So this document will be better than the draft
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