[apps-discuss] APPSDIR review of draft-ietf-v6ops-icp-guidance-04

"Jiankang YAO" <yaojk@cnnic.cn> Wed, 21 November 2012 10:23 UTC

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I have been selected as the Applications Area Directorate reviewer for this 
draft (for background on appsdir, please see 
http://trac.tools.ietf.org/area/app/trac/wiki/ApplicationsAreaDirectorate ).

Please resolve these comments along with any other comments you 
may receive.  
Document: draft-ietf-v6ops-icp-guidance-04
Title: IPv6 Guidance for Internet Content and Application Service Providers
Reviewer: Jiankang Yao 
Review Date: 20 Nov. 2012 
Summary:  This draft is almost ready for publication as an Informational RFC.

Major Issues: none
Minor Issues: none

Nits: 
1)This document does not follow the Key words for use in RFCs [RFC 2119]. For example, almost all "may or must "  use lower cases.