[apps-discuss] Applications Directorate review of draft-ietf-6man-ipv6-atomic-fragments-03

Ted Hardie <ted.ietf@gmail.com> Fri, 11 January 2013 18:25 UTC

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Document:draft-ietf-6man-ipv6-atomic-fragments-03
Title: Processing of IPv6 "atomic" fragments
Reviewer: Ted Hardie
Review Date: January 11, 2012
IETF Last Call Date:January 2, 2012

Summary: This document sets out the problem and solution clearly and
succinctly, and I believe it
                   is ready for publication as a Standards Track RFC.

Major Issues: None seen.

Minor Issues: None seen.

Nits: Other than those raised by Ray Hunter, I would suggest dropping
Appendix A on publication.
         The list of operating systems tested is not comprehensive,
and the information will (hopefully)
          quickly become stale.  This is, however, largely a stylistic
choice, hence its classification as
          a nit. .