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"Jiankang YAO" <yaojk@cnnic.cn> Fri, 12 April 2013 07:57 UTC

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I have been selected as the Applications Area Directorate reviewer 
for this draft (for background on appsdir, please 
see 
http://trac.tools.ietf.org/area/app/trac/wiki/ApplicationsAreaDirectorate 
).  
Please resolve these comments along with any other comments 
you may receive. Please wait for direction from your document 
shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft.

Document: 
draft-ietf-nfsv4-rfc3530bis-25 
Title: 
Network File System (NFS) Version 4 Protocol


Reviewer: Jiankang Yao
Review Date: April 12, 2013

Summary:

This draft is very long. I mainly focus on section 12 of this document.This part is about internationalization.

Major issue:none.

Minor issue:

  This part refer to ISO.10646-1.1993, which is almost same to UNICODE 3.2. The RFC3454 referred by this document is also based on ISO.10646-1.1993. The problem is that the UNICODE has been updated to Version 6.2 from version 3.2. RFC3454 may not work for UNICODE 6.2.
  Should this document be updated to refer to the new version of UNICODE?

 

Best Regards

Jiankang Yao

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