[apps-discuss] AppsDir review of draft-ietf-abfab-eapapplicability-03
Alexey Melnikov <alexey.melnikov@isode.com> Tue, 25 June 2013 16:11 UTC
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I have been selected as the Applications Area Directorate (appsdir) reviewer for this draft. (For background on appsdir, please see http://trac.tools.ietf.org/area/app/trac/wiki/ApplicationsAreaDirectorate). Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. Document: draft-ietf-abfab-eapapplicability-03 Update to the EAP Applicability Statement for ABFAB Reviewer: Alexey Melnikov Review Date: June 25, 2013 IETF Last Call Date: June 17 2013 IESG Telechat Date: N/A Summary: This draft is ready for publication as a Standards Track document. Major Issues: None Minor Issues: None Nits: I think it would be a good idea to expand acronym MSK on first use. Be nice to novice readers. SMTP and HTTP need Informative references.
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