[apps-discuss] APPSDIR review of draft-ivov-grouptextchat-purpose-03
"Vijay K. Gurbani" <vkg@bell-labs.com> Mon, 15 July 2013 13:36 UTC
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Subject: [apps-discuss] APPSDIR review of draft-ivov-grouptextchat-purpose-03
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I have been selected as the Applications Area Directorate reviewer for this draft (for background on appsdir, please see http://trac.tools.ietf.org/area/app/trac/wiki/ApplicationsAreaDirectorate ). Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. Document: draft-ivov-grouptextchat-purpose-03 Title: A group text chat purpose for conference and service URIs in the Session Initiation Protocol (SIP) event package Reviewer: Vijay K. Gurbani Review Date: Jul-15-2013 IETF Last Call Date: Jul-22-2013 IESG Telechat Date: Not known Summary: This draft is ready for publication as an Informational RFC. Major Issues: 0 Minor Issues: 0 Nits: 1 Nits: ----- - S2: The use of "integrity protect" as a verb is rather unorthodox in the sentence, "Clients can integrity protect and encrypt ...". Better to reword it as "Clients can protect the integrity of and encrypt ..." Thanks, - vijay -- Vijay K. Gurbani, Bell Laboratories, Alcatel-Lucent 1960 Lucent Lane, Rm. 9C-533, Naperville, Illinois 60563 (USA) Email: vkg@{bell-labs.com,acm.org} / vijay.gurbani@alcatel-lucent.com Web: http://ect.bell-labs.com/who/vkg/ | Calendar: http://goo.gl/x3Ogq
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