[apps-discuss] APPSDIR review of draft-petithuguenin-behave-turn-uris-05

S Moonesamy <sm+ietf@elandsys.com> Sun, 04 August 2013 23:30 UTC

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Subject: [apps-discuss] APPSDIR review of draft-petithuguenin-behave-turn-uris-05
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I have been selected as the Applications Area Directorate reviewer 
for this draft (for background on APPSDIR, please see 
http://trac.tools.ietf.org/area/app/trac/wiki/ApplicationsAreaDirectorate ).

Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments 
you may receive. Please wait for direction from your document 
shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft.

Document: draft-petithuguenin-behave-turn-uris-05
Title: Traversal Using Relays around NAT (TURN) Uniform Resource Identifiers
Reviewer: S. Moonesamy
Review Date: August 4, 2013
IETF Last Call Date: July 19, 2013

Summary: This document is nearly ready for publication as a Proposed Standard.

This document defines two URI schemes to provision the TURN 
Resolution Mechanism.

Major issues: None

Minor issues:

The Terminology Section is different from the usual RFC 2119 
boilerplate.  I am listing this as a minor issue for the attention of 
the Apps ADs.

This document restates the ABNF from RFC 3986.  I suggest including 
it by reference.  Please note that I read Appendix B.

Nits:

This review does not include editorial nits.

Regards,
S. Moonesamy

[apps-discuss] APPSDIR review of draft-petithugue… S Moonesamy
Re: [apps-discuss] APPSDIR review of draft-petith… Marc Petit-Huguenin
Re: [apps-discuss] APPSDIR review of draft-petith… S Moonesamy