[AVT] Comments on draft-basso-avt-videoconreq-01.txt

[Magnus Westerlund <magnus.westerlund at ericsson.com>]

Hi,

I have reviewed the draft and have the following comments:

1. The IPR statement is part of the Status of this memo section.

2. The paragraph referring to Section 10 of RFC 2026 shall be removed.

3. What's new from version 00 should be moved to after the TOC.

4. What's new section and probably other places contain forbidden 
characters. Written in MS word without turning of auto replace?

5. Section 2: First paragraph: The references seems to be broken, The 
first two should be 9 and 7 as I can understand it.

6. The drafts page wide is wrong. The header and also part of the text 
has more than 72 columns.

7. The page header is strange. Why is it saying 4 on every page?

8. Page footer: Shouldn't it be "Basso" instead of "basso"?

9. Section 3: Last sentence: Missing space prior to the sentence.

10. Section 4: Use case 4, extra spaces in several places.

11. Section 5.2: command 4: Why is this needed. I can't fully understand 
the need for it. What purpose does it really have?

12. Section 7.4: Why is this a MUST requirement, I am lacking motivation 
for it.

13. Section 7.8: Why is it a strict requirement for the codec control 
protocol to interoperate? And what is required to be able to call it 
that things interoperate.

14. Section 7.9: I don't think this requirement is possible to 
guarantee. I think one SHOULD design the protocol to try to meet it. 
However the fact is that there are cases in deployment where the losses, 
etc., will prevent it to be fulfilled.

15. Reference 7: It should be updated, their are several newer versions 
available then the indicated one.

16. Reference 9: RFC 3550 has been available rather long time now. 
Please also remember to include the STD 64 indicator in this reference.


Cheers

Magnus Westerlund

Multimedia Technologies, Ericsson Research EAB/TVA/A
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