Re: [AVT] Working group last call: 2833bis and 2833bisdata

[Magnus Westerlund <magnus.westerlund at ericsson.com>]

Hi

I have reviewed draft-ietf-avt-rfc2833bis-10 and have the following issues:

1. The abstract contains normative language. Not at all suitable.

2. There is not text in the draft stating its relation to RFC 2833. Is 
this document obsoleting or updating RFC 2833. The WG last call says 
updating, but what of RFC 2833 is kept compared to the other documents?

3. Section 2.2.1: What is the definition of measurement point?

4. Section 7. States that these media types are new. Which isn't true 
they are updated.

5. Section 7.1: I think it should be noted that the registrations are 
done in accordance with RFC 3555 and draft-freed-media-type-reg-05.txt.

6. Section 7.1.1: Events parameter. The default that no value indicates 
0-15 should be explicitly stated also here.

7. Section 7.1.1: Encoding consideration. Yes, this is correct according 
to RFC 3555 but not according to draft-freed-media-type-reg-05. As we 
will update RFC 3555 we should follow freeds document. Thus the encoding 
considerations should state that the content is "framed" and "binary". 
See freeds draft for the definitions.

8. Section 7.1.1: No restriction on usage. This heading shall state that 
this media type is only defined for transfer using RTP.

9. Section 7.1.2: Apply commend 7 and 8 on this section also.

10. Reference 17 is not used. Please fix that either by removing or 
actually using it.


I would also like to note that also this WG last call forgot to send the 
draft to ietf-types for review.

Cheers

Magnus

Colin Perkins wrote:
> This is to announce a working group last call on the following two  drafts:
>
> http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-avt-rfc2833bis-10.txt
> http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-avt-rfc2833bisdata-04.txt
>
> Please send any final comments on these two drafts to the mailing  list 
> by 31 October 2005. If no substantive issues are raised by that  time, 
> we intend to submit these to the IESG for publication as  proposed 
> standard RFCs, updating RFC 2833.
>
> Colin
>
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