RE: [AVT] RE: I-D ACTION:draft-ietf-avt-hc-over-mpls-protocol-02.txt

["Ash, Gerald R \(Jerry\)" <gash at att.com>]

Colin,

Thanks for the comments and suggestions.

> I still find this draft difficult to read, and in need of a 
> significant rewrite to improve the quality of the prose, and of the 
> explanations.

Please provide any specific suggestions and/or suggested text, that way
you're more likely to be happy with the result!

> At the very least, I suggest expanding the introductory material on  
> MPLS and header compression, adding complete worked examples of the  
> negotiation process, 

I think you're suggesting an example of using the PW Interface Parameter
Sub-TLV carrying one of the HC setup TLVs given in Section 4.2 of
http://ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-avt-hc-over-mpls-protocol-02.
txt.  Such an example would emphasize the PW setup and also show how the
HC scheme setup is performed with PWs.

> and editing the protocol description for clarity  
> of explanation. 

Again, please provide any specific suggestions and/or suggested text.

Thanks,
Jerry

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