Re: [AVT] I-D Action:draft-ietf-avt-rfc3189bis-01.txt

[Colin Perkins <csp at csperkins.org>]

On 25 Mar 2008, at 01:00, Internet-Drafts at ietf.org wrote:
> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts  
> directories.
> This draft is a work item of the Audio/Video Transport Working  
> Group of the IETF.
>
>
> 	Title           : RTP Payload Format for DV (IEC 61834) Video
> 	Author(s)       : K. Kobayashi, et al.
> 	Filename        : draft-ietf-avt-rfc3189bis-01.txt
> 	Pages           : 18
> 	Date            : 2008-03-24
>
> This document specifies the packetization scheme for encapsulating
> the compressed digital video data streams commonly known as "DV" into
> a payload format for the Real-Time Transport Protocol (RTP).  This
> document Obsoletes RFC 3189.
>
> A URL for this Internet-Draft is:
> http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-avt-rfc3189bis-01.txt

Thanks for the update. This version addresses the majority of the  
concerns I had with the -00 draft. I noticed only two minor issues:

1) In section 3.2, the parameters in the "a=fmtp:" line should be  
semicolon separated to match the description at the start of section  
3 (I think my previous comments on this also missed the semicolon -  
my apologies). I also recommend a brief comment in this section to  
note that the examples in RFC 3189 are incorrect.

2) The document uses non-RFC3330 addresses in the examples.

Regards,
-- 
Colin Perkins
http://csperkins.org/


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