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[AVT] Comments on draft-ietf-avt-rtp-ipmr-03



Hi,

I reviewed the draft and have the following comments most are editorial

 

1.       The draft should have an author name at the top, not just SPIRIT SDP, there is an author name at the end Sergey Ikonin.

2.       You describe the payload but it is not clear to me how do you know the size of each speech frame. It may be good to explain it if you can.

3.       In section 3 RTP payload format you should start with a section on RTP header usage. See for example RFC 5404.

4.       In the security consideration you can use the first two paragraph from RFC 5404 security section.

5.       You can add a section on congestion control, this codec can handle congestion so it will be good to mention it.

6.       You can add to section 5.2 a subsection on offer answer considerstions

 

Some nits

 

1.       In section 2  "This making the bit stream scalable and allows reduce …"

2.       In section 2 " But because of the scalable nature of IP-MR codec there is no need to duplicate the whole previous frame - only the core layer may be retransmitted."

3.       In section 3.2 "BR (3 bits): base rate for core layer of frame(s) in this packet using the table for CR. "

 

 

Thanks

Roni Even