Re: [bmwg] WGLC: draft-ietf-bmwg-igp-dataplane drafts

[Al Morton <acmorton at att.com>]

Comments on meth-18, all nits,
Al (mostly as participant)

At 01:44 PM 7/14/2009, Al Morton wrote:
> ...This message begins a Last call on the IGP-Dataplane Convergence
> Time Benchmarking drafts.
>
> http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-bmwg-igp-dataplane-conv-term-18
> http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-bmwg-igp-dataplane-conv-meth-18
> http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-bmwg-igp-dataplane-conv-app-17
>
> The Last Call will end on July 31, 2009.


Section 4, top of page 10,
s/At least one condition need to /At least one condition needs to /


5.7.  Measurement Accuracy
...  When packet jitter is much less than the convergence
   time, it is a negligible source of error and therefor it will be
s/therefor/therefore/

5.9 Tester Capabilities
Add "Also see section 6 for method-specific capabilities."

6.1.3.  Measurement Accuracy

   TBD
(can't leave this TBD, if there's no obvious material, delete section ?)


Section 7, Reporting Format

        Maximum Packet Delay Threshold      seconds
this is called "Forwarding Delay Threshold" in the term doc, right?
pick one for both...

Section 9, same as terms, use the standard BMWG paragraphs...