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Re: [decade] Start of WGLC for draft-ietf-decade-problem-statement-02

"Woundy, Richard" <Richard_Woundy@cable.comcast.com> Fri, 28 January 2011 14:38 UTC

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Below are my personal comments on the DECADE Problem Statement draft. Please do not make any changes to the draft at this time; I would like the authors to incorporate these comments after WGLC.

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-- Rich

From: Woundy, Richard
Sent: Friday, January 28, 2011 9:26 AM
To: decade@ietf.org
Cc: Songhaibin; Woundy, Richard
Subject: Start of WGLC for draft-ietf-decade-problem-statement-02

Folks,

Haibin and I are starting the working group last call for draft-ietf-decade-problem-statement-02, http://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-decade-problem-statement/, to be completed by Monday February 14. Please send all concerns, suggestions and comments about this internet-draft to the DECADE mailing list, decade@ietf.org<mailto:decade@ietf.org>.

Authors, please do not make any additional changes to the internet-draft unless directed by the WG chairs.

Draft reviewers, it would be helpful to get your confirmation that your previous review comments have been correctly reflected in this version.

Thanks.

-- Rich and Haibin

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