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Internet-Drafts at ietf.org wrote:
> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
> This draft is a work item of the Dynamic Host Configuration Working Group of the IETF.
>
> Title : A Timezone Option for DHCP
> Author(s) : E. Lear, P. Eggert
> Filename : draft-ietf-dhc-timezone-option-02.txt
> Pages : 10
> Date : 2006-7-18
>
Minor nit:
You should probably use the same text to describe the contents of the
DHCP and DHCPv6 options. So either:
- - "IEEE 1003.1 String" or "TZ POSIX String"
- - "Reference to the TZ Database" or "TZ Database String"
I prefer the second, because it is used later in the text where they are
described.
Minor suggestion:
In the section on deprecation, I find the following text confusing:
Implementations of the time offset IPv4 option SHOULD
implement this option as well. Others SHOULD instead implement this
option.
Perhaps something like:
"Current implementations that support the time offset IPv4 option SHOULD
implement this option also. Other implementations SHOULD implement this
option, and SHOULD NOT implement the time offset IPv4 option."
The draft looks very good! :)
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Shane
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