On Fri, Sep 28, 2007 at 03:15:01PM -0400, Internet-Drafts at ietf.org wrote: > http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-dhc-pxelinux-03.txt This is an edit pursuant to IESG review. I would like to ask folks to have a look and make sure they agree with the changes before the end of next week, Oct. 5. The easiest thing is to look at the diff side by side with this handy tool: http://tools.ietf.org/wg/dhc/draft-ietf-dhc-pxelinux/draft-ietf-dhc-pxelinux-03-from-02.diff.html The largest changes are rearranging blocks of text, adding a block of text in the introduction to explain the unusual procedure of allocating RFC3942 options, citation fixups, and an explicit conformance definition that requires 3 of the 4 options (not the MAGIC option). Note in particular that a reference to RFC 854 (telnet) was made for "NVT-ASCII". This is a reference that hasn't been made in previous documents now RFC, and may not be made in some standing documents? Those writing drafts may wish to add this reference while they remember. -- Ash bugud-gul durbatuluk agh burzum-ishi krimpatul. Why settle for the lesser evil? https://secure.isc.org/store/t-shirt/ -- David W. Hankins "If you don't do it right the first time, Software Engineer you'll just have to do it again." Internet Systems Consortium, Inc. -- Jack T. Hankins
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