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[dhcwg] AD review of draft-ietf-dhc-dhcpv6-bulk-leasequery



I have made my AD review of this draft. The specification was well written and I had no major complaints -- thanks!

The draft has been sent for IETF Last Call. However, there were two minor editorial issues that I'd like the authors to address. Feel free to submit a new version right away, or wait for Last Call comments and address these along with the other received comments.

Please expand the term DUID upon first use.

   DATA message that does not contain an OPTION_CLIENT_DATA MUST BE
s/MUST BE/MUST be/

Jari

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