Re: [Dime] Review of "Diameter Applications Design Guidelines Document"

[Victor Fajardo <vfajardo at tari.toshiba.com>]

Hi Alexis,

Thanks for the review. Since you have a lot of editorial comments, I 
will publish a 02 version to polish the doc. Additional comments in-line:

> Dear gentlepeople,
> please find attached a quick and more editorial review of the
> draft-fajardo-dime-app-design-guide-01.txt.
>
> For your convenience I attached an edited version of the document, as
> well as a diff.
>
> The change suggestions around line 414 include a '(?)' where I'd like to
> indicate, that I wasn't quite sure if I understood the text correctly
> myself.
>
> 1) Either as I suggested an "application server is provisioned to use
>     a different protocol to access the accounting server" or the
>     difference between the two accounting servers as it is in the
>     document at the moment should be explained in detail.
>   

The intent of the text is what you have suggested.


> 2) Is the intention to say: In
>     a) all
>     b) most
>     of the cases above... ?
>   

The intent is 'all'.


thanks,
victor


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