[Dime] draft-ietf-dime-qos-attributes: DISCUSS/Comments addressed in rev 13
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[Dime] draft-ietf-dime-qos-attributes: DISCUSS/Comments addressed in rev 13
I'm working on the next rev of the DIME QoS Attributes draft and just noticed that I neglected to send the description of the changes made for the previous revision (-13).
Assuming better late than never, here is the summary of the IESG DISCUSS and comments addressed in rev 13 published on July 13th:
+ Amanda Babar (IANA), Tue.June 16th
- TCP-Flag-Type: Fixed in rev 13.
- Questions answered and actions confirmed on Wed. June 17th
+ Lothar Reith, Sun. June 21st
- Issue1: QoS-Resources description. Fixed in rev 13.
- Issue 2: Not an issue. Replied Tue, June 30th.
- Issue 3: Charging granularity. Fixed in rev 13.
- Issue 4: Not an issue. Replied Tue, June 30th.
- Issue 5: Improve QoS-Semantic desc. Replied Tue, June 30th. Fix needed.
. Replied with text on Mon, Aug 10th. To be fixed in rev 14
- Issue 6: Rework DCCA example. Replied Tue, June 30th. Fix needed.
. Replied Mon, Aug 10th. To be fixed in rev 14
- Issue 7: DCCA Typo. Replied Tue, June 30th.
. Obsolete with DCCA example reworking.
- Issue 8: Rework DCCA example. Replied Tue, June 30th. Fix needed.
. Replied Mon, Aug 10th. To be fixed in rev 14
+ Gonzalo Camarille, Wed. June 24th
- Expand AVP and ABNF acronyms in Abstract.
. To be fixed in rev 14.
- Remove reference to RFC4005 from Abstract
. To be fixed in rev 14.
+ Ralph Droms, Mon Jun 29th
- Typos fixed in rev 13. Replied on Tue, June 30th.
+ Lars Eggert, Wed Jul 1st
- DISCUSS-DISCUSS: Why TCP Options? Avi replied on Aug 7th.
- DISCUSS: Firewall functionality. Fixed in rev 13.
- Comment: Ports context within transport protocol. Fixed in rev 13.
* Adrian Farrel, Wed Jul 1st
- Comment: Figure 1 and 5 alignment issues. Fixed in rev 13.
- Comment: Section 5 action wording. Fixed in rev 13.
- Comment: Identify IANA registries. Fixed in rev 13.
* Magnus Westerlund, Thu July 2nd
. Replied on Mon July 13th
- Discuss: Normative ref to formal language (notation). Fixed in rev 13.
- Discuss: 4.1.7.2 Missing ref to imported definitions. Fixed in rev 13.
- Discuss: 5.1 Missing info necessary for actions. Not an issue.
- Discuss: 10.1 Missing registries. Fixed in rev 13.
- Discuss: 10.2/10.3 Clarify new registry. Fixed in rev 13.
Stay tuned for rev 14. Coming soon. ;)
Regards
Mark
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