Re: [Fecframe] FW: [MMUSIC] WGLC on draft-ietf-mmusic-rfc4756bis-03

[Ulaş C. Kozat <ulas.kozat at gmail.com>]

Ali,

I read the draft. Assuming the usage of other SDP lines are correct, I
think the draft is clear enough. I have two minor comments that might
add further clarity to the document:

1. In Section 1, the sentence "However, not all FEC schemes support
the full range of possible scenarios (e.g., when the source streams
carry different top-level media types such as audio and video)." is
vague. Maybe removing this sentence and combining with the following
paragraph can make a better transition.

2. In Section 4.4., you refer to Section 3.1 in two places saying that
limitations in that section should be kept in mind. When I look at
Section 3.1, it mainly describes the changes from other RFCs rather
than listing specific limitations.

Ulas

On Thu, Oct 15, 2009 at 3:50 PM, Ali C. Begen (abegen) <abegen at cisco.com> wrote:
> Here is a quick update on the draft based on some comments from MMUSIC.
> http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-mmusic-rfc4756bis-04
>
> Please review this one, if you are planning to do a review.
>
> -acbegen
>
>> -----Original Message-----
>> From: fecframe-bounces at ietf.org [mailto:fecframe-bounces at ietf.org] On Behalf Of Ali C.
>> Begen (abegen)
>> Sent: Wednesday, October 14, 2009 12:19 PM
>> To: fecframe at ietf.org
>> Subject: [Fecframe] FW: [MMUSIC] WGLC on draft-ietf-mmusic-rfc4756bis-03
>>
>> This is the WGLC for the 4756bis draft.
>>
>> Recall that this is an essential update for the framework and needs to be approved before
>> we can finalize the SDP draft. So, please review it and send your yeah/nah to
>> mmusic at ietg.org.
>>
>> It is a short spec, won't take much time.
>> http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-mmusic-rfc4756bis-03
>>
>> Thanks, acbegen.
>>
>> -----Original Message-----
>> From: mmusic-bounces at ietf.org [mailto:mmusic-bounces at ietf.org] On Behalf Of Jean-Francois
>> Mule
>> Sent: Wednesday, October 14, 2009 12:10 PM
>> To: mmusic at ietf.org
>> Cc: Joerg Ott; draft-ietf-mmusic-rfc4756bis at tools.ietf.org
>> Subject: [MMUSIC] WGLC on draft-ietf-mmusic-rfc4756bis-03
>>
>> This is to start a 2-week working group last call on draft
>> draft-ietf-mmusic-rfc4756bis-03,
>> http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-mmusic-rfc4756bis-03.  The comment
>> period will end on Wednesday October 28.
>>
>> Please send your comments to the mmusic list and the authors.
>>
>> Thank you,
>> Jean-Francois.
>>
>>
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