[Gen-art] Gen-ART LC Review of draft-shiomoto-ccamp-switch-programming
Ben Campbell <ben@nostrum.com> Thu, 14 July 2011 21:10 UTC
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Subject: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC Review of draft-shiomoto-ccamp-switch-programming
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I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-shiomoto-ccamp-switch-programming-05 Reviewer: Ben Campbell Review Date: 2011-07-14 IETF LC End Date: 2011-07-18 Summary: Ready for publication as an informational RFC Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: -- section 1, paragraph 4: "...with relation to the programming..." ... in relation to... -- 3.1, last paragraph: Note that the references say SHOULD rather than MUST. Using "must not" here, even non-normatively, seems a bit overstated.
- [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC Review of draft-shiomoto-cca… Ben Campbell
- Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC Review of draft-shiomoto… Adrian Farrel
- Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC Review of draft-shiomoto… Ben Campbell
- Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC Review of draft-shiomoto… Stewart Bryant