[Gen-art] review of draft-sparks-genarea-mailarch-05.txt
Francis Dupont <Francis.Dupont@fdupont.fr> Mon, 13 August 2012 09:17 UTC
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I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on
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Document: draft-sparks-genarea-mailarch-05.txt
Reviewer: Francis Dupont
Review Date: 20120810
IETF LC End Date: 20120813
IESG Telechat date: unknown
Summary: Ready
Major issues: None
Minor issues:
- a very minor question: why in the search syntax is there no "NOT" operator,
only "AND" and "OR"?
- annoying edition bug in 2.6
Nits/editorial comments:
- ToC page 2 and 6 page 7: Acknowledgements -> Acknowledgments
- 1 page 3 and 2.1 page 4: capabilites -> capabilities
- 2.1 page 4: occuring -> occurring
- 2.6 page 7: please remove the last item, i.e.:
o The system must allow the administrator to delete messages from an
archived list
which is already specified by the previous one, i.e.:
o The system must allow the administrator to add messages to and
delete messages from an archived list. The system should log such
actions.
Regards
Francis.Dupont@fdupont.fr
- [Gen-art] review of draft-sparks-genarea-mailarch… Francis Dupont
- Re: [Gen-art] review of draft-sparks-genarea-mail… Robert Sparks