[Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-ccamp-assoc-ext-05
"Peter Yee" <peter@akayla.com> Thu, 06 September 2012 23:29 UTC
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Subject: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-ccamp-assoc-ext-05
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I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq> Document: draft-ietf-ccamp-assoc-ext-05 Reviewer: Peter Yee Review Date: Sep-06-2012 IETF LC End Date: Aug-29-2012 IESG Telechat date: Sep-13-2012 Summary: This draft is basically ready for publication, but has a nit that could be fixed before publication. [Ready with nits.] Generally, the diffs between -04 and -05 look fine to me and incorporate my previously offered suggestions. Nit: Section 4, 1st paragraph, 3rd sentence: "identifies" -> "identify".