[Gen-art] Gen-ART Telechat Call review of draft-ietf-radext-radius-extensions-12
Meral Shirazipour <meral.shirazipour@ericsson.com> Tue, 19 February 2013 04:54 UTC
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I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at < http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq> . Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. Document: draft-ietf-radext-radius-extensions-12 Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour Review Date: 2013-02-18 IETF LC End Date: 2013-01-25 IESG Telechat date: 2013-02-21 Summary: This draft is ready for publication as Proposed Standard (with some editorial comments). Nits/editorial comments: -[Page 15], 3rd paragraph, "withing"--typo-->"within" -[Page 27], Figure at the bottom is cut. -[Page 32], Figure at the bottom is cut. -[Page 37], Section 5.2, "implementors"-typo?-->"implementers" Best Regards, Meral --- Meral Shirazipour Ericsson Research www.ericsson.com
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