[Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-appsawg-acct-uri-03
Meral Shirazipour <meral.shirazipour@ericsson.com> Wed, 06 March 2013 15:32 UTC
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I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq> . Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-appsawg-acct-uri-03 Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour Review Date: 2013-03-06 IETF LC End Date: 2013-03-06 IESG Telechat date: NA Summary: This draft is ready to be published as Proposed Standard but I have some comments. Nits/editorial comments: [Page 1] please consider spelling out "URI" in the abstract as in "uniform resource identifier (URI)" [Page 3] paragraph 4, "method for deferencing", do you mean "dereferencing" ? [Page 5] Section 5, "..access to personally identifying information..", do you mean "..access to identifiable personal information" ? Best Regards, Meral --- Meral Shirazipour Ericsson Research www.ericsson.com
- [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-… Meral Shirazipour
- Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-i… Peter Saint-Andre
- Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-i… Meral Shirazipour
- Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-i… Barry Leiba
- Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-i… Peter Saint-Andre
- Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-i… Jari Arkko