[Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-pkix-est-07
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Subject: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-pkix-est-07
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I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-pkix-est-07 Reviewer: Roni Even Review Date:2013-6-22 IETF LC End Date: 2013-6-24 IESG Telechat date: 2013-6-27 Summary: This draft is ready for publication as Standard track RFC. This is not a comment, I read the draft and not being an expert in this area I found it clear for me to read. The document structure made it easier to read. Major issues: Minor issues: Nits/editorial comments: 1. In section 4.5.2 "to use the the secp384r1 elliptic curve" repeated "the"