[Gen-art] Review: draft-ietf-tls-applayerprotoneg-03
"Joel M. Halpern" <jmh@joelhalpern.com> Fri, 20 December 2013 15:43 UTC
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Subject: [Gen-art] Review: draft-ietf-tls-applayerprotoneg-03
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Document: draft-ietf-tls-applayerprotoneg-03
Transport Layer Security (TLS) Application Layer
Protocol Negotiation Extension
Reviewer: Joel M. Halpern
Review Date: 20-December-2013
IETF LC End Date: 27-December-2013
IESG Telechat date: N/A
Summary: This document is ready for publication as a Proposed Standard.
Major issues: N/A
Minor issues:
It appears that the ProtocolNameList is required to have at least
two entries, based on "protocol_name_list<2..2^16-1>. Why are at least
two required, and how is the reconciled with the fact that when the the
servers send a response using this construct it is required to include
only 1 value?
Nits/editorial comments:
- [Gen-art] A *new* batch of IETF LC reviews - 2013… A. Jean Mahoney
- [Gen-art] Review: draft-ietf-tls-applayerprotoneg… Joel M. Halpern