[Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-isis-rfc6326bis-01
Alexey Melnikov <alexey.melnikov@isode.com> Mon, 20 January 2014 11:12 UTC
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I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on
Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at
<http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments
you may receive.
Document: draft-ietf-isis-rfc6326bis-01
Reviewer: Alexey Melnikov
Review Date: 2014-01-20
IETF LC End Date: 2014-01-22
IESG Telechat date: 2014-01-23
Summary: This draft is nearly ready for publication as a standard track RFC.
Major issues: None
Minor issues:
o Label: This carries the fine-grained label identifier for all
subsequent MAC addresses in this sub-TLV, or the value zero if no
label is specified.
I fully admit ignorance of the topic, but what is exactly "fine-grained
label" and where is the exact format defined? If it is defined later in
the document, can you please add a forward reference. If it is defined
in another document, can you please add a reference to that.
In Sections 2.2.4 and 2.3.1:
What are the requirements on backward compatibility between different
versions of TRILL. Are TLVs formats supported for a version N also valid
for version N+M? If you have any implied assumptions, please state them
in the document.
Nits/editorial comments: None
- [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-isis-rfc63… Alexey Melnikov
- Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-isis-r… Donald Eastlake
- Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-isis-r… Alexey Melnikov
- Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-isis-r… Jari Arkko
- Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-isis-r… Donald Eastlake
- Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-isis-r… Jari Arkko