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[Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-idr-last-as-reservation-04.txt

Francis Dupont <dupont@fdupont.fr> Mon, 07 April 2014 12:49 UTC

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I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on
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<http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.

Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments
you may receive.

Document: draft-ietf-idr-last-as-reservation-04.txt
Reviewer: Francis Dupont
Review Date: 20140401
IETF LC End Date: 20130403
IESG Telechat date: unknown

Summary: Not Ready

Major issues: there is a typo in the IANA considerations, i.e., the
heart of the document. It seems to be a trivial typo but there is no
proof of this...

Minor issues: None

Nits/editorial comments:
 Appendix A page 4: Acknowledgements -> Acknowledgements

Regards

Francis.Dupont@fdupont.fr

PS: the typo looks like a bad cut & paste between versions 03 and 04.
If (/when?) this is confirmed by authors I'll change summary to Ready
and the typo from major issue to editorial.

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