[Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-precis-framework-15
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Subject: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-precis-framework-15
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I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on
Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at
<http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
This document is beautifully written and is ready to go. As a person
unfamiliar with the basic concepts I had to read into the document a bit
to get traction, then re-read from the beginning, but the additional
effort was minimal and rewarding.
Document: draft-ietf-precis-framework-15
Reviewer: Tom Taylor
Review Date: 13/04/2014
IETF LC End Date: 23/04/2014
IESG Telechat date: 24/04/2014
Summary: This document provides:
-- the historical background leading up to the approach used for
its technical content
-- definitions of two string classes suitable as bases for two
general classes of application
-- instructions for creating profiles of the string classes
(particularly the FreeformClass) for specific applications
-- a satisfying set of security considerations.
This document obsoletes Stringprep (RFC 3454). It establishes new IANA
registries for derived properties of Unicode code points for Unicode
versions subsequent to 6.2, for base string classes, and for profiles.
Major issues:
Minor issues:
Nits/editorial comments:
- [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-precis-… Tom Taylor
- Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-pre… Peter Saint-Andre
- Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-pre… Jari Arkko