[Gen-art] Gen-ART telechat review of draft-ietf-netext-pmip-cp-up-separation-05.txt

Brian E Carpenter <brian.e.carpenter@gmail.com> Fri, 01 August 2014 20:16 UTC

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Subject: [Gen-art] Gen-ART telechat review of draft-ietf-netext-pmip-cp-up-separation-05.txt
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Document: draft-ietf-netext-pmip-cp-up-separation-05.txt
Reviewer: Brian Carpenter
Review Date: 2014-08-02
IETF LC End Date: 2014-07-02
IESG Telechat date: 2014-08-07

Summary:  Ready
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Comment:
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Thanks for fixing my nits!