[Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-6lo-lowpan-mib-03

Martin Thomson <martin.thomson@gmail.com> Mon, 11 August 2014 22:41 UTC

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I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on
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Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments
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Document:draft-ietf-6lo-lowpan-mib-03
Reviewer: Martin Thomson
Review Date: 2014-08-11
IETF LC End Date: 2014-06-22
IESG Telechat date: (if known)

Summary: Ready.

Nits/editorial comments:

Looks like the first paragraph of the Security Considerations was left
hanging.  I looked and this sentence is a little confusing, since all
the MAX-ACCESS attributes are the same.

I'm not sure that this is something that would concern me either.
Sure, SNMP provides an attacker a great feedback loop if they want to
learn what is going on, but that is something you trade off against
things like being able to do things like maintenance and all that
necessary stuff.