[Gen-art] Last Call Review of draft-ietf-oauth-json-web-token-25

Tom Taylor <tom.taylor.stds@gmail.com> Sun, 24 August 2014 03:38 UTC

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I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on
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Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments
you may receive.

Document: draft-ietf-oauth-json-web-token-25
Reviewer: Tom Taylor
Review Date: 23/08/2014
IETF LC End Date: 3/09/2014
IESG Telechat date: TBD

Summary: This draft is good to go. IDNits complains about the non-use of 
RFC 4648 (normative) but this is the Base64 specification invoked by 
"base64url". I did not re-verify the examples (done by the Document 
Shepherd).

Major issues:

Minor issues:

Nits/editorial comments: