[Gen-art] Gen-ART Telechat review of draft-ietf-weirds-bootstrap-09.txt
Suresh Krishnan <suresh.krishnan@ericsson.com> Wed, 29 October 2014 03:31 UTC
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Subject: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Telechat review of draft-ietf-weirds-bootstrap-09.txt
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I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html). Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. Document: draft-ietf-weirds-bootstrap-09.txt Reviewer: Suresh Krishnan Review Date: 2013/10/28 IESG Telechat date: 2013/10/30 Summary: The document is almost ready for publication as Proposed Standard, but I do have a comment you may wish to consider. * Sections 5.2 and 5.3 -> The document uses some non-documentation addresses (AFAIK) in some of the examples. e.g. 28.2.0.0/16 for an IPv4 prefix and 2600::/16 for an IPv6 prefix. Is it possible to rewrite these examples using reserved documentation addresses? Strangely enough, idnits does not seem to catch them either. Thanks Suresh
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