[Gen-art] review: draft-ietf-kitten-gss-loop-04
"Joel M. Halpern" <jmh@joelhalpern.com> Wed, 28 January 2015 22:34 UTC
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Subject: [Gen-art] review: draft-ietf-kitten-gss-loop-04
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I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on
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Document: draft-ietf-kitten-gss-loop-04
Structure of the GSS Negotiation Loop
Reviewer: Joel M. Halpern
Review Date: 28-January-2015
IETF LC End Date: 9-February-2015
IESG Telechat date: n/a
Summary: This document is ready for publication as an Informational RFC
Major issues: N/A
Minor issues: N/A
Nits/editorial comments:
Section 3.4 paragraph 2: "It is likely appropriate
for the acceptor to report this error condition to the acceptor via
the application's communication channel." I presume that should be
reported to the initiator?
- [Gen-art] A *new* batch of IETF LC reviews - 2015… A. Jean Mahoney
- [Gen-art] review: draft-ietf-kitten-gss-loop-04 Joel M. Halpern
- Re: [Gen-art] review: draft-ietf-kitten-gss-loop-… Benjamin Kaduk
- Re: [Gen-art] review: draft-ietf-kitten-gss-loop-… Jari Arkko