[Gen-art] Gen-ART Telechat Call review of draft-ietf-httpauth-basicauth-update-06

Meral Shirazipour <meral.shirazipour@ericsson.com> Thu, 19 February 2015 17:34 UTC

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I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ  at < http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.

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Document: draft-ietf-httpauth-basicauth-update-06
Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
Review Date: 2015-02-19
IETF LC End Date: 2015-02-19
IESG Telechat date: 2015-02-19

Summary: This draft is ready to be published as Standards Track RFC but I have some comments.

Nits/editorial comments:
-[Page 4], "the definition of the '"Digest" authentication scheme"--->remove extra ' before Digest
-[Page 7], not sure about this, since this RFC is a Standards Track, how do we handle its  dependence on draft: [PRECIS] draft-ietf-precis-saslprepbis-13? I.e. will we wait for that draft to be RFC first?
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For the password, recipients MUST support all characters defined in
   the "OpaqueString" profile defined in in Section 4.2 of [PRECIS].
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Best Regards,
Meral
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Meral Shirazipour
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