[Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-v6ops-cidr-prefix-01
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Thread-Topic: Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-v6ops-cidr-prefix-01
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I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on
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Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments
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Document: draft-ietf-v6ops-cidr-prefix-01
Reviewer: David Black
Review Date: April 20, 2015
IETF LC End Date: April 20, 2015
Summary: This draft is basically ready for publication, but has nits that
should be fixed before publication.
This is a short crisp draft on behavior of CIDR prefixes in IPv6 forwarding
with respect to the /64 boundary in IPv6 addresses. It's clear, well explained
easy to understand, plus refreshingly short. Nicely done!
Major issues: (none)
Minor issues: (none)
Nits/editorial comments: Ok, I found a nit ... and so did idnits ;-).
-- Abstract
Hardware and software
algorithms should therefore impose no rules on prefix length, but
implement longest-match-first on prefixes of any valid length.
"algorithms" isn't the right word.
I suggest "implementations of routing and forwarding"
idnits pointed out that: A later version (-06) exists of
draft-ietf-opsec-v6-05
Thanks,
--David
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- [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-v6ops-cidr… Black, David
- Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-v6ops-… mohamed.boucadair
- Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-v6ops-… Jari Arkko