[Gen-art] Gen_ART LC review of draft-ietf-tcpm-newcwv-10
"Roni Even" <ron.even.tlv@gmail.com> Wed, 20 May 2015 15:59 UTC
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I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-tcpm-newcwv-10 Reviewer: Roni Even Review Date:2015-5-20 IETF LC End Date: 2015-5-22 IESG Telechat date: Summary: This draft is ready for publication as an Experimental RFC. Major issues: Minor issues: Nits/editorial comments: 1. I am not sure that there is a need for the first sentence in section 1.2 2. In section 4.4.1 MSS is used but not expanded Maximum Segment Size (MSS)