[Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-homenet-prefix-assignment-06
Meral Shirazipour <meral.shirazipour@ericsson.com> Thu, 11 June 2015 16:37 UTC
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From: Meral Shirazipour <meral.shirazipour@ericsson.com>
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Subject: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-homenet-prefix-assignment-06
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I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-homenet-prefix-assignment-06 Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour Review Date: 2015-06-11 IETF LC End Date: 2015-06-11 IESG Telechat date: NA Summary: This draft is ready to be published as Standards Track RFC. Major issues: Minor issues: Nits/editorial comments: I found the draft a bit hard to follow as the incentive was not clear at first. A few sentences in abstract or introduction on 'why' we need this algorithm and what would the 'alternatives' be would be useful. Right now it only says 'what' the algorithm does. Best Regards, Meral --- Meral Shirazipour Ericsson Research www.ericsson.com
- [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-… Meral Shirazipour
- Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-i… Pierre Pfister
- Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-i… Meral Shirazipour
- Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-i… Pierre Pfister