[Gen-art] review: draft-ietf-pcp-proxy-08

"Joel M. Halpern" <jmh@joelhalpern.com> Fri, 19 June 2015 16:18 UTC

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Document: draft-ietf-pcp-proxy-08
     Port Control Protocol (PCP) Proxy Function
Reviewer: Joel M. Halpern
Review Date: 19-June-2015
IETF LC End Date: 29-June-2015
IESG Telechat date: N/A

Summary: This document is ready for publication as a Proposed Standard

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