[Gen-art] review: draft-ietf-dnsop-onion-tld-00
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Subject: [Gen-art] review: draft-ietf-dnsop-onion-tld-00
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I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on
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Document: draft-ietf-dnsop-onion-tld-00
The .onion Special-Use Domain Name
Reviewer: Joel Halpern
Review Date: 18-July-2015
IETF LC End Date: 11-August-2015
IESG Telechat date: N/A
Summary: This document is nearly ready for publication as a Proposed
Standard RFC
Major issues: It seems to this reviewer that at least the definition of
how to use these names, reference tor-rendezvous, needs to be a
normative reference. It appears likely that tor-address also ought to
be a normative reference.
Minor issues: It is not clear that a github reference without version
identification is sufficiently stable for a normative reference from an RFC.
Nits/editorial comments:
- [Gen-art] A *new* batch of IETF LC reviews - 2015… A. Jean Mahoney
- [Gen-art] review: draft-ietf-dnsop-onion-tld-00 Joel M. Halpern
- Re: [Gen-art] [DNSOP] review: draft-ietf-dnsop-on… Tom Ritter
- Re: [Gen-art] review: draft-ietf-dnsop-onion-tld-… Jari Arkko