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Peter Yee <peter@akayla.com> Tue, 28 July 2015 21:16 UTC

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I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on
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Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you
may receive.

Document: draft-bradner-iaoc-terms-01
Reviewer: Peter Yee
Review Date: Jul-28-2015
IETF LC End Date: Jul-27-2015
IESG Telechat date: TBD


Summary: This draft is almost ready for publication as a BCP but has an
open issue, described in the review. [Ready with issues]

The draft updates BCP 101 to fix some issues around the beginning and end
of IAOC terms and how they relate to the first meeting of each IAOC cycle.


Major issues: None

Minor issues: 

The draft causes the IAOC chair’s term to end with the commencement of the
IAOC meeting occurring at the first IETF meeting of the year.  The new
chair is selected during the meeting.  That being the case, who chairs the
meeting and declares the results of the election?

Nits:

Page 2, last paragraph, last sentence: change the second occurrence of
“IETF” to “IAOC”.  I believe that is what was meant.

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